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the silence is breaking me by ~anomalyme:iconanomalyme:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

©2002-2009 ~anomalyme
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this is a self portrait and a poem of mine combined.
i stained the paper with coffee and watercolor and then used a calligraphy pen w/ india ink. i really like it, but it seems like it needs something...
any thoughts?

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~fetish May 30, 2002, 1:13:22 PM
Nice work :) (Smile)
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~pewxi May 30, 2002, 7:32:21 PM
i think its perfect how it is.. xpresses so beautifully, love it ;]
love your writings & the style..
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~skyfire May 31, 2002, 1:41:07 PM
beautiful lettering. how did you achieve the small splatters around the word "FACE"?
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~corporatewhore May 31, 2002, 8:01:40 PM
great job.. i think you should leave it.. sometimes adding too much takes away from it.

the style is awesome.. love the scratchiness and lines and the little colours around the face.

grungy :D (Big Grin)
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~raizeherbump Jun 1, 2002, 7:35:50 AM
rather impressive image that crop gives it some added flare that i really cannot put my fingers on.

i love to see some kind of personality in stuff like this and this definitely has it!

great work +fav
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`flummox Jun 4, 2002, 7:13:32 PM
I like the combination of words and picture. I love the crumbled paper and the color of it is fantastic.

The words are deep...emotional yet strong.

Good work.
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~n0deal Jun 11, 2002, 7:38:35 AM
The sketched portrait really grabbed my attention. I like the crumpled quality of the paper and the reddish stain along side the black of the ink. It all compliments the poetry rather nicely.
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